It was just another rainy day ,
he and I were whiling time away ..
I was desperate and ached to say I love u a lot,
I cudnt make up my mind , should I or should I not..
Then I thought I'd rather have my best friend,
than confess my love and bring it to an end.
The rain fell harder,it soaked my hair ,
I couldnt make up my mind ,I dint care..
He jumped wid joy and said I love the rain,
I smiled at him tryin hard to hide the pain..
Suddenly I knew , I think I was sure,
I definitely cudnt pretend , no, not any more..
I got up , I had to say goodbye,
I think he understood , he dint ask me why ?
I shook his hand ,I could not believe,
He was letting me go , I dint want to leave..
I knew he thought I was stupid and dumb,
for acting like this and feeling so numb.
And then he slipped his hand around my waist,
pulled me close and said make no haste..
I dint know what he meant but I held on tight,
he looked at me and laughed at my plight..
He said I know you think this aint true,
but Baby, My darling I love you and will always do.
I stepped back to look into his eyes,
I wanted to make sure it was the truth and no lies..
He called me 'Beautiful' and caressed my cheek,
I could take it no longer , my knees felt weak..
He moved his lips closer to mine and I lost all control,
My body was trembling..love was taking its toll..
It was still raining and in the rain we kissed,
You bet it was a moment neither wanted to miss.
Never again will i say it was just another rainy day
I had found my love , my love was here to stay..
"Can romance begun with a kiss
ReplyDeleteConclude in a lifetime of bliss"
Reminds me of our first rain rendezvous .. marvelously put together..
★★★★★ - LA Times
ReplyDeleteAnd she does it yet again!
ReplyDeleteHats off..'Beautiful'
Sorry sis.,i can't comment on this blog coz nothing can be said about such a lovely poem written by a lovely person..... i can only read and read and read........
ReplyDeleteMABADAULAT TUSSI GREAT HO............
kya baat hai bhai...
ReplyDeletekya baat hai...
kaafi romantic shomantic ho gayi aap toh...
waah!!!
:)
OMG!!! This is the best poem I have ever read sweetie. I got goosebumps after reading it.
ReplyDelete::bows down:: You are genius!!!
absolutely mind blowing....very pretty and very romantic...
ReplyDelete@Hubby ..Thnk u sooo much sweetheart..ur no doubt my biggest inspiration...I love you Baby... Muaaaaaaaaaaah !!
ReplyDelete@Jess ..Thnks babis ..Me happy u liked it :))
@Bhai .." Tohfaa kabool karo " ..kahan hai mera tohfaa kaneez :P :D
@Sneha ..dhanyawaad hai bhai..
@Nandu .. Awwwwww thnks babes *blushin* ..Im no genius bt yeah m preening for sure :P :P
*hugs*
@Priyanka ..thnk u ..now i kno ur reading my posts :P :D
awesome !!
ReplyDeletethank you :) :)
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