22 January 2010

Love's Labour Lost













It was just another rainy day ,
To him , i had nothing left to say ..

Its the truth he said, i did nothing wrong ,
I knew it was just lies all along..

If it only was , just this one time,
I was a fool to think our love was sublime..

I wish he told me he loved me no more,
he ruined everything ,all that was pure..

How could he do this to me , i was his wife ?
he knew not , he had scarred me for life..

I wish it was just me , I'd pretend i dint care,
but to our little child , this wasnt fair..

He was all i ever wanted ,I wish this wasnt the end,
but nothing he said now, could undo or amend..

I had to move on, I knew i was scared,
he no longer deserved, the love or life we shared..

Never again i would say,it was just another rainy day,
Love had betrayed me and Life led me astray..

13 comments:

  1. Ouch!!!
    After reign over me..this is like a bolt from the blue..the bitterness has been effectively conveyed.
    And now we have a poetess amongst us..Bravo Darings!
    heart-wrenching!

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  2. I kno this was quite the opposite ..bt dats precisely wat i wanted to do ..Start the poem wid d same sentence and take it in a completely diff direction ..I guess it worked :))
    and as for your compliments Merci Beaucoup :)

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  3. c'est si doux madame..
    je t'aime !!

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  4. dude...
    you cant do this...
    first the ecstasy of love then this...
    not fair...
    :(

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  5. It was written to elicit precisely the response you're giving me :P ..Objective achieved ..Yayyyyyy !!!
    Thnks Saaaneha :P :)) *hugs*

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  6. i know... :))
    from one writer to another ;)

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  7. Speaking of which ..when do i get to read your second post ..its been a while ..wat says ?

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  8. wow gilr..this was heartbreaking...so true with soem one i know of ...cross my heart, this shouldnt happen to anybody at all!! at all!!

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  9. so sad ! :( such a good poem , woven with simplest words yet having such profound meaning ..

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  10. @ Sulagna ..Thnks dear and yeah i agree with you.. i hope it never happens to neone be it a friend or foe !!

    @adreamygal ..hey,welcm to my space and thanks so much for ur compliment :)
    I hope ill keep ya comin back fr more :))

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  11. @ Soumaya ..Awwwwwww * hugs * *hugs *

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