It was just another rainy day ,
To him , i had nothing left to say ..
Its the truth he said, i did nothing wrong ,
I knew it was just lies all along..
If it only was , just this one time,
I was a fool to think our love was sublime..
I wish he told me he loved me no more,
he ruined everything ,all that was pure..
How could he do this to me , i was his wife ?
he knew not , he had scarred me for life..
I wish it was just me , I'd pretend i dint care,
but to our little child , this wasnt fair..
He was all i ever wanted ,I wish this wasnt the end,
but nothing he said now, could undo or amend..
I had to move on, I knew i was scared,
he no longer deserved, the love or life we shared..
Never again i would say,it was just another rainy day,
Love had betrayed me and Life led me astray..
Ouch!!!
ReplyDeleteAfter reign over me..this is like a bolt from the blue..the bitterness has been effectively conveyed.
And now we have a poetess amongst us..Bravo Darings!
heart-wrenching!
I kno this was quite the opposite ..bt dats precisely wat i wanted to do ..Start the poem wid d same sentence and take it in a completely diff direction ..I guess it worked :))
ReplyDeleteand as for your compliments Merci Beaucoup :)
je vous en prie madame..toujours!!
ReplyDeletec'est si doux madame..
ReplyDeleteje t'aime !!
dude...
ReplyDeleteyou cant do this...
first the ecstasy of love then this...
not fair...
:(
It was written to elicit precisely the response you're giving me :P ..Objective achieved ..Yayyyyyy !!!
ReplyDeleteThnks Saaaneha :P :)) *hugs*
i know... :))
ReplyDeletefrom one writer to another ;)
Speaking of which ..when do i get to read your second post ..its been a while ..wat says ?
ReplyDeletewow gilr..this was heartbreaking...so true with soem one i know of ...cross my heart, this shouldnt happen to anybody at all!! at all!!
ReplyDeleteso sad ! :( such a good poem , woven with simplest words yet having such profound meaning ..
ReplyDelete@ Sulagna ..Thnks dear and yeah i agree with you.. i hope it never happens to neone be it a friend or foe !!
ReplyDelete@adreamygal ..hey,welcm to my space and thanks so much for ur compliment :)
I hope ill keep ya comin back fr more :))
it makes me cry!!
ReplyDelete@ Soumaya ..Awwwwwww * hugs * *hugs *
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